bleedingink4U

I have a art show for my friends, family, and all the town.  But im really nervse and i could use ur help. Please comment my best work and tell me what u think of it.  There is another thing my girlfriend is also in this art show and im sure she also would love ur comments. At ~more-gan~. But i would really love ur help PLEASE AND THANK U from the deepest part of our hearts.

I can't believe it's been a year since I kissed my fears on their salty lips and said to them I love you all I carried the weight of the world on my shoulders for 20 years and look at me now I've got something to say about the last 12 months I've lived I'm not the same kid I was when I was younger I just thought you should know I take a pill every day to help me deal with life and oh my god, I've lost control I stare at accidents in a sick attempt to feel at all I carried the weight of the world on my shoulders for 20 years and look at me now I've got something to say about the family that I've lost I hope my mother and my

And honestly, I have been begging for answers That you and only you can give to me A voice crying loud I've been crying for days now And as I start to run, I stop to breathe (And I was nearly scared to death) And I was nearly scared to death (Why you left in paragraphs) Why you left in paragraphs (The words were nearly over us) The words were nearly over us You stop and turn and grab your bags And I'll be here by the ocean Just waiting for proof that there's sunsets and silhouette dreams All my sand castles fall like the ashes of cigarettes And every waves drags me to sea I could stand here for hours Just to ask God the quest